This week I have been working on a work book called The Last Straw. The last straw is a work book about pranks. It was a very cool project and I love it I am going to show you a slide of what it look like ant the end of the blog. My next steps are probably to write more specifically, especially using more describing words. The slide that I am going to put on is one of the slides that I like the most. I wonder if you will like it? I hope you do. Well as I said here is the slide.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 5 August 2020
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Hi Paige, It´s me Lucy from YMS in Rimu. I really enjoyed your blog, I like how you made a reflection about it. I think you added a good amount of detail. To improve I would re-read the whole blog (including the DLO) just to check for mistakes, Because some have spelling mistakes like the one on slide 6 with Bidiy. I have done something similar to this but I can´t rememeber what it was about ._.
ReplyDeleteOverall Awesome Job!
Kind Regards
From Lucy :)