My Writing Celebration!

Today in my class I have been doing my writing celebration.A writing celebration is when you get a piece of writing and then your parents look at it .This week's piece of writing is about an mysteries egg  appears after a  lightning storm ,and it is one of the longest piece of writing I have ever done.Here is my piece of writing I hope you like it.Please put some feedback in the comments below.

One day on a merky stormy night the lightning was aggressive and the crowd 
was wet and flooded.
I was in my house waiting for the storm to stop and it made me feel worried and cyprus.

The next morning I was going to go outside. When I opened the door I found an egg.
It was yellowy brown and it  had black stripes and weird symbols on it. I was confused.

Then suddenly the egg shot up into the sky and came back down hoverd on the doorstep then
disappeared…..

I went inside and into my room then I saw that the egg was on my bed and it was starting to
crack then an animal
type thing came out of it I did not know what it was so I called it a thing then I heard
mum coming up the stairs so I put it under the bed.

Once mum left the room the thing came out from under the bed I thought what should I
do with it so I took it for a walk in the park and I then I get a call from my friend and then
the thing ran away after the call the park was a mess the seats were half eaten and there
was now grass I was in shocked.When I found the thing I went home I made a basement under
the house and it was score so then I put the thing in the basement and then looked the thing in
the basement I went back to my room and relaxed and thought that I would not have to worried
about it any more or did I.

Then the next day I went to the basement and checked on the thing and it was gone.
So I went to the park then I went to school I went to the library and then I came home then
when I turned it the tv on I sower that my thing was on the news.

Apparently when the new fairy went out of the haber two minutes later one of the
passenger sower movement in the water and it jump and ate the bout once I sower
the thing I got my shoes on and got on my bike and went to the harber then I sower
the thing in the water and I grabbed one of the jet skies and I went to the thing.

When I got there I grabbed the thing and I went back to my house and worked on the
basement more then I put the thing into the basement and locked twelve locks and left that
night I went stargazing and I sower a wishing star and I made a wish my wish was for the thing
to leave forever.

My Word Count: 465