495 Brougham Street,
Opawa, Christchurch 8023
Dear ice skating arena
In the holidays my friend and I went ice skating for a fun trip. We stayed for a few hours and I hired skates but my friend took her own. I liked your lights it was like disco on ice. I also liked the games like spin the bottle and the coloured light dancing competition.
When I got on the ice it was a little bit slippy so I think that when it gets icey you could makshor the
ice is not slippery so people dont fol olver.To make shor people get good at ice skating and come back
another time. Maybe you could make the toilets a little bit cleaner to.When people are on the ice maybe
you should
make shoor there is less people on the ice when there is a lot of people .
ice is not slippery so people dont fol olver.To make shor people get good at ice skating and come back
another time. Maybe you could make the toilets a little bit cleaner to.When people are on the ice maybe
you should
make shoor there is less people on the ice when there is a lot of people .
From Paige
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